Distortion boxed lines clothing sample

I am planning to come out with my own clothing brand called 'Distortion'. Here is the first design I created for a piece of clothing. I have always like distorted lines especially in grids, therefore I wanted to experiment and incorporate this art style in my first clothing design work. Below are three version I created, the last image was my favorite version:

I decided to put the last version onto a hoodie as the design looked better on fabric without a black boxed frame around it. However the version with the larger frame would look better as a poster.